Comments on: Gift of the Archons http://www.aliengods.jbsheets.com/gift-of-the-archons Science, history, and legend. Controversial theories of human origins, mixed with a measure of coincidence, and sprinkled with prose and fantasy. Mon, 28 Dec 2009 19:09:50 +0000 http://wordpress.org/ hourly 1 By: Justa namlonaem http://www.aliengods.jbsheets.com/gift-of-the-archons/comment-page-1#comment-39 Justa namlonaem Sat, 15 Aug 2009 21:54:23 +0000 http://www.aliengods.jbsheets.com/?p=213#comment-39 Hey there, Maybe you should try to post to the Baen Bar. They have a slush pile for their online readers to judge portions of stories and make comments on. I've gotten lots of ideas from them, as well as getting shot down a few times (yes, I write sf, too). These people are a great resource, and many of the comments come from the actual editors of Baen publishing, as well as their authors. Justa Hey there,
Maybe you should try to post to the Baen Bar. They have a slush pile for their ****** readers to judge portions of stories and make comments on. I’ve gotten lots of ideas from them, as well as getting shot down a few times (yes, I write sf, too).
These people are a great resource, and many of the comments come from the actual editors of Baen publishing, as well as their authors.

Justa

]]> By: Eyrisahn http://www.aliengods.jbsheets.com/gift-of-the-archons/comment-page-1#comment-32 Eyrisahn Fri, 24 Apr 2009 02:25:43 +0000 http://www.aliengods.jbsheets.com/?p=213#comment-32 Ok, that makes sense. I look forward to reading more. Ok, that makes sense. I look forward to reading more.

]]> By: Admin http://www.aliengods.jbsheets.com/gift-of-the-archons/comment-page-1#comment-29 Admin Wed, 22 Apr 2009 23:29:35 +0000 http://www.aliengods.jbsheets.com/?p=213#comment-29 Anu, my historian. This was never intended to be a story but rather as you say a fictional account wrapped around the world I put together for the story. Whether it is any hard theory? Well, maybe. There are holes in it, but it represents a good part of my AAT twisted view of how things could have played out, mixed with enough possibilities that are not very founded in science, but rather become good plot twists to build a story on. This was intended to be a back-story element that I build the "world" around so that I can have some consistency in my stories. So many modern stories break their own rules, and this is my attempt to set down a foundation to employ as I pull these stories out of my head. Also, don't be too dissapointed that there is not more. It is intended to dovetail in with the completed work, as an introduction of sorts. Anu, my historian. This was never intended to be a story but rather as you say a fictional account wrapped around the world I put together for the story. Whether it is any hard theory? Well, maybe. There are holes in it, but it represents a good part of my AAT twisted view of how things could have played out, mixed with enough possibilities that are not very founded in science, but rather become good plot twists to build a story on. This was intended to be a back-story element that I build the “world” around so that I can have some consistency in my stories. So many modern stories break their own rules, and this is my attempt to set down a foundation to employ as I pull these stories out of my head. Also, don’t be too dissapointed that there is not more. It is intended to dovetail in with the completed work, as an introduction of sorts.

]]> By: Eyrisahn http://www.aliengods.jbsheets.com/gift-of-the-archons/comment-page-1#comment-26 Eyrisahn Wed, 22 Apr 2009 03:48:42 +0000 http://www.aliengods.jbsheets.com/?p=213#comment-26 Good story construction, good context. The hallmark of good fiction is believability, and you've hit it right on the nose. Just out of curiosity, is this a story for story's sake or a fictional account wrapped around theory? Is there real evidence of any kind for any of this? I was disappointed that the entry ended, I wanted to read the rest of it! Good story construction, good context. The hallmark of good fiction is believability, and you’ve hit it right on the nose.

Just out of curiosity, is this a story for story’s sake or a fictional account wrapped around theory? Is there real evidence of any kind for any of this?

I was disappointed that the entry ended, I wanted to read the rest of it!

]]> By: Dr Stephen http://www.aliengods.jbsheets.com/gift-of-the-archons/comment-page-1#comment-25 Dr Stephen Mon, 20 Apr 2009 03:47:19 +0000 http://www.aliengods.jbsheets.com/?p=213#comment-25 You must have been reading the Gnostic scriptures. You must have been reading the Gnostic scriptures.

]]> By: Admin http://www.aliengods.jbsheets.com/gift-of-the-archons/comment-page-1#comment-23 Admin Tue, 07 Apr 2009 05:24:58 +0000 http://www.aliengods.jbsheets.com/?p=213#comment-23 Hey Terry, Thanx for the comment. You say "Great so far" what would you suggest I do from here...what would you expect to see? I'm not sure if I should post all my stories without publishing first, but thats a long way off. Just soliciting suggestions from readers. -Jeff Hey Terry,
Thanx for the comment. You say “Great so far” what would you suggest I do from here…what would you expect to see? I’m not sure if I should post all my stories without publishing first, but thats a long way off. Just soliciting suggestions from readers.

–Jeff

]]> By: Terry Hush http://www.aliengods.jbsheets.com/gift-of-the-archons/comment-page-1#comment-22 Terry Hush Tue, 07 Apr 2009 02:42:21 +0000 http://www.aliengods.jbsheets.com/?p=213#comment-22 Great so far Great so far

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